Sunday, February 28, 2010

Second Draft (Bad Poetry)

we sat around the table
to attemt to write a poem
everyone had ideas
but none of them my own
mom wanted a love story
i wish shed get a clue
my brother wanted animals
ducks that quacked, cows that mooed
as for me, i plan dont care
as long as its done...
writing poems may be for poets
but for me it is just no fun

2 comments:

  1. I thought it was cool how you wrote a poem about writing poems. Great job. I like the rhyming too

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  2. very nice! thought it was cool how your wrote how you didnt like poems.

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